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FireWOLF109
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Age 29, Male

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In a volcano

Joined on 6/16/09

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This is rather poor art. Extensive use of rulers is obvious. There is only one person showing their hands, which, while that part isn't a big problem, the 4 people in the picture hiding their hands in almost the exact same fashion is. The picture is also drawn on printer paper, rather than a quality drawing pad. The breasts on the female are not connected, as if she is not wearing a bra as well. The tree in the background looks closer to the mushroom cloud of a nuclear weapon, and the irises of the eyes are in terrible proportion to the pupils. Not to mention, why did you draw the eyeballs as if they dont completely fill up the ocular sockets? If JohnnyDamon stated to NOT submit this to the art portal, I agree with him.

Well I'm working on it, so its not really complete yet, plus its kinda hard when there are people that tried to make you mess up while drawing, so I never said that I didn't have things to FIX but rather things to add. and about the drawing paper/pad, there were none available during study hall.

The only thing I read were excuses. Not reasons.

Adding things is not fixing things. And here, there is so much to fix.

That's why I never said that I didn't have things to fix, nor did I say that I had little to fix.

The entire deal just needs to be tossed out, as this is not the level that a 16 year old should be drawing at. This is closer to what a 9 or 10 year old draws.

I agree on the argument thing, plus as I stated it earlier, I'm STILL working on it which means that it won't look good until it's finished.